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NoahsDove
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 Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 12:59 am Post subject: Noah's Dove |
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I'm kind of doing a comic book version of Peak Oil/Doomer story. This story is copyrighted by me and date stamped here by this website.
Story is about a man who goes back to a small town after the world blows over. I'm starting right now, feel free to comment. Whatever suggestions made here may be used by me. So, please, no lawsuits.
http://s38.photobucket.com/albums/e146/nimzoblanca/Noahs%20Dove/ |
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Rogozhin
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| Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:08 am Post subject: Re: Noah's Dove |
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Hm. There are only two pages of cells.
What's the rapture?
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NoahsDove
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| Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:12 am Post subject: Re: Noah's Dove |
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| Rogozhin wrote: | Hm. There are only two pages of cells.
What's the rapture? |
Rapture? Like I said, I'm just starting the story. Story is part love story.
Summary:
Something happens to the world, maybe part war/ part global depression after peak oil. I really don't want to go into the details of what happens to the world. maybe that's not important. I'm more interested in focusing on the people who have to deal with the aftermath, if you know what I mean. |
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Rogozhin
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| Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:21 am Post subject: Re: Noah's Dove |
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Rapture? Like I said, I'm just starting the story. Story is part love story.
Summary:
Something happens to the world, maybe part war/ part global depression after peak oil. I really don't want to go into the details of what happens to the world. maybe that's not important. I'm more interested in focusing on the people who have to deal with the aftermath, if you know what I mean. |
IF you really want to develop characters you should create a structure with a foundation based upon the russian magicians.
Peak Oil is a fiction (at this point). Are you attempting to write fiction?
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NoahsDove
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| Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:47 pm Post subject: Re: Noah's Dove |
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Russian magicians?
Yes, near future type of fiction. |
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